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考点六十 书面表达之应用文
应用文是人们日常生活中广泛使用的文体。它最突出的特点是它 的实际应用性，应用文包括很广，如书信、通知、日记、海报、便条、启事、请柬、电报、合同等。应用文的语言应使用规范语言，重在实用，力求朴实、准确、简洁。
常用写作模板
一、书信
… Middle School, …（写信人地址）
April 8th, 2016（写信的日期）
Dear XXX
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Yours sincerely,
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信头
称呼
签名
结束语
正文
二、日记
三、通知
Announcement/Notice
Ladies and gentlemen,
Your attention, please. I have something to tell you.
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Thanks for listening. / That’s all. Thanks.
标题
开场白
称呼
内容
结束语
四、启事
1. 遗失启事
2. 招领启事
3. 招聘启事
五、便条
六、发言稿
七、倡议书
八、调查报告
(一)
假如你是阳光中学初三学生Daniel，写信给青少年专家Sigmund Friend，告诉他进入初三后你的烦恼。请根据下表中信息，完成一封求助信。
要求： 1. 词数80左右(信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。
2. 要点必须包括表格中的所有信息，可以适当发挥。
3. 表达清楚，语句通顺，语义连贯。
| 个人信息 | 15岁，九年级学生； |
| 性格特点 | 勤奋，喜欢运动，……； |
| 烦恼 | 学习和兴趣之间找不到平衡； |
| 愿望 | …… |
Dear Sigmund Friend,
My name is Daniel. I’m from Sunshine Middle School. ___________________________________________
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(二)
你们学校今天将要举行校园歌手大赛，假如你是这个比赛的主持人萨拉(Sarah)，请根据以下提示为这个校园歌手大赛写一篇主持稿。
内容提示：
1. 开场白：到校园歌手大赛的时间了，我是主持人萨拉；
2. 介绍参赛选手：今天我们有八位参赛选手，他们来自我们学校每个年级；
3. 介绍比赛规则：校园歌手大赛规则简单；每一位选手将在舞台上唱一首歌；然后将由我们的观众决定他们最喜欢的歌手；得到最多的支持的那位选手将成为这次比赛的胜利者；
4. 比赛过程：你为比赛做好准备了吗？第一个上台的选手是……；你是今天的幸运得主，你已经赢得了今天的奖品——一台电脑；
5. 结束语：感谢大家；这是今天的表演，下次见。
写作要求：
1. 词数：80词左右；
2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校名称。
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(三)
连云港开展了＂真阅读＂工程，为了让阅读进校园，为了营造一种＂多读书，读好书＂的良好氛围，你班将举行一次主题班会，要求以 ＂A good book that influenced me a lot ＂ 为题作演讲，向同学们介绍一本自己读过的好书(the book’s name, the time you read, the content, the reason…)，并谈谈自己的感悟。
注意：1. 词数：100词左右(演讲稿的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。
2. 不得出现真实的校名和人名。
A good book that influenced me a lot
Boys and girls,
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That’s all. Thank you!
题组一
(一)【2019 •江苏省无锡市】
假设你叫李文，是无锡阳光中学(Wuxi Sunshine Middle School)的一名学生。今天暑期，你将代表你校赴瑞士参加“模拟联合国”会议并发言，此次会议的主题是A Green World。你草拟了发言流程图，请根据下图写一篇英文发言稿。
注意事项：
1. 发言稿须根据流程图自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；
2. 流程图中包括部分非限定性内容，仅供参考；
3. 词数在 90 个左右，发言稿的首尾已在答题卡上给出，不计入总数。
4. 发言稿中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息。
5. 发言稿必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。
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(二)【2019 •山东省聊城市】
假如你叫陈伟，2019年6月22日和23日是你中考后的第一个周末，请你制定一个周末活动计划，并用英语给你的英国笔友Alan写一封电子邮件，说明你的活动安排。
主要活动内容包括：
1. 6月22日上午在家读书；下午与家人和朋友外出活动；
2. 6月23日到朋友家附近的公园捡垃圾；
3. 你对本次活动的期待。
注意：
1. 邮件字数：80词左右。
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯，但邮件中不能出现真实的人名、地名。
3. 邮件的开头和结尾已经给击，不计入总词数。
Dear Alan,
I’m going to enjoy myself during the coming weekend. ___________________________________________
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Yours,
Chen Wei
(三)【2019 •吉林】
假如你是李华，想参加China Daily 举办的以”梦想职业体验”为主题的2019年夏令营活动。请给主办人Mr. Smith写一封介绍个人情况的申请邮件。内容包括：1.个人信息与兴趣爱好2.梦想职业与个人计划
写作要求；1.词数90词左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
2. 文中不得出现真实的学校名称与姓名。
Dear Mr. Smith,
It’s my pleasure to introduce myself to you. ____________________________________________________
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I do hope to join in the activity and look forward to your reply.
Best wishes!
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
(四)【2019 •四川凉山州】
每个人的生命只有一次，一定要珍爱自己的生命。该怎样安全自救？请根据以下提示，以How to Protect Ourselves为标题写一篇发言稿。
| 安全对每个人都很重要 | 交通：外出时遵守交通规则 | |||
| 食品：吃健康食物，少吃垃圾食品 | ||||
| 活动：体育锻炼时，不要弄伤自己 | 不私自下河游泳 | |||
| 自救是重要的技能之一 | 交友需谨慎 | 远离危险之人 | ||
| 遇到危险保持冷静 | 然后要及时报警或向老师、家长求助 | 尽可能避免受伤害
保证自己的安全 |
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要求：1. 语言表达准确，短文连贯、通顺。
2. 短文应包括所有内容，可适当发挥，不要逐句翻译。
3. 词数80左右。文章开头部分已给出，不计人总词数。
参考词汇：safety,traffic rules, hurt oneself, without permission, self-protection, stay away from…, be careful, be in danger, keep calm, call…for help, be hurt.
Dear friends,
Everyone has only one life, we should treasure our lives. But how can we protect ourselves?
Here are some suggestions. _____________________________________________________________________
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In a word, we should try our best to protect ourselves and value our lives.
That’s all. Thank you!
题组二
(一)(2018 • 江苏连云港中考)
积极锻炼是非常重要的，为此，某英文报开展了一次关于初中生段炼情况的调查活动。请你根据下列图表和相关文字提示，以＂Exercising is important!＂为题，用英语写一篇短文。
| 要点 | 具体内容 | |||
| 调查数据 |
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| 锻炼的意义 | 有益身体健康;保持思维敏锐;变得自信快乐。 | |||
| 你的建议 | 就如何更好地开展锻炼，提出你的建议(至少两点)。 | |||
注意：(1)短文应包括所给内容要点，可适当发挥，使文章连贯；
(2)词数90左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；
(3)短文中不得提及考生所在学校及自己的姓名等信息。
(4)参考词汇：敏锐的sharp
Exercising is important!
Recently, we have done a survey about students’ exercising. According to the survey, ____________________
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(二)
(2017﹒安徽)假如你是李华，你们学校将举行＂弘扬中华传统文化——戏曲进校园＂展演活动，你打算邀请你的美国朋友Mike参加。请你根据以下提示用英文给他写一封电子邮件。
1. 时间：7月1日下午2点；
2. 地点：学校操场；
3. 内容：文化展览、节目表演等。
提示词：戏曲opera n. 表演performance n.
注意：1. 词数80～100；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 信中不能出现与本人相关的信息；
4. 开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Mike,
I know you are interested in Chinese traditional culture. ___________________________________________
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Yours,
Li Hua
(三)
(2017﹒四川成都)假如你是班长，今天是你班的英语活动日，你将带领同学们骑车去Happy Park。请按照下面的图示用英语写一篇发言稿，在入园前向同学们介绍园区设施(facilities)的位置及游园注意事项，并希望同学们遵守规则，玩得开心。
注意：1. 短文应包括要求的所有信息；
2. 发言稿的格式完整；
3. 短文应结构完整、语句通顺、句式多样；
4. 发言稿中不能出现个人和学校的真实信息；
5. 词数：100左右。
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(四)
(2017﹒黑龙江齐齐哈尔)尊老敬老是中华传统美德，你是老年之家(the old people’s home)的负责人王强，在假期即将到来之际，你想要招聘与你志同道合，愿为公益事业服务的志愿者。请以此为话题拟一则招聘广告。(30-50词之间)
提示：1. 要求有爱心，善沟通……
2. 请有意者给你打电话686-7729。
Volunteers Wanted
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(五)
(2017﹒江苏南通)为了满足广大学生对DIY的喜爱，你们学校成立了DIY俱乐部。假如你是Justin，想加入该俱乐部，请根据下表所提示的要点和内容写一份申请函，谈谈你想加入该俱乐部的理由。
| 要点 | 内容 |
| 培养独立意识 | 独立思考；自主选择；敢于尝试(或自拟内容) |
| 调节学习生活 | 获得乐趣；丰富生活；体验成功(或自拟内容) |
| 提升个人素养 | 直面困难；……(请考生自拟两点内容) |
参考词汇：独立independence n. ；调节adjust vt.；素养quality n.
注意：1. 申请函中必须包含所给要点，具体内容可以适当发挥，不要简单翻译；
2. 词数90左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数；
3. 申请函中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。
Dear Chairperson,
I would like to join the DIY Club. _____________
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I hope I can be a member of the DIY Club.
Yours Sincerely,
Justin
(六)
(2017﹒北京)假如你是李华，正在美国参加一个交换生项目。今天下午你应邀和朋友Jim 一家外出，请用英语给接待家庭的妈妈Mrs. Smith 写一个留言条，告诉她你们要去哪里，去做什么，以及你回家的时间和方式。
提示词语：park, movie theater, go boating, watch a movie
提示问题：Where are you going?
What are you going to do?
When and how will you get home?
Dear Mrs. Smith,
My friend Jim asks me to go out with his family this afternoon.______________________________________
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Yours,
Li Hua
(一)
(甘肃省武威市第十七中学2018届九年级期末)假如你是刘梅，升入九年级后，你的学习和生活都发生了很大变化。请你根据下面表格中的提示，给你的笔友玛丽亚(Maria)写一封电子邮件，介绍一下你最近在学习和生活上的变化。
| 过去 | 现在 |
| 作业少，学习轻松 | 作业多，压力大 |
| 放学后有时间参加各种活动 | 整天学习，甚至熬夜，放弃了自己的爱好 |
| 周末有时间和家人、朋友相聚 | 周末也要上课 |
要求：1. 包括以上要点，可适当发挥；
2．80词左右。
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(二)
(武汉市青山区2017-2018学年度九年级期中)假如你是学生会主席李雷，学校想在元月调考之前组织一次秋游活动，请你组织策划，并用英文写一份书面通知传达同学们你的计划安排。
内容要点如下：
1. 活动目的：缓解压力，放松心情，增进同学感情；了解城市文化；
2. 时间安排：下周日上午7：30在校门口集合，乘大巴游玩，下午6：00返回；
3. 路线安排：学校——东湖——黄鹤楼——木兰天池——学校；
4. 请在下周二下午5点之前报名；
5. 补充一两点个人的想法。
要求：
1. 词数：60—80；
2. 内容要连贯得体。
参考词汇：sign one’s name 报名 Yellow Crane Tower 黄鹤楼 Mulan Great Lake 木兰天池
Notice
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(三)
(湖北省长阳县龙舟坪中学2018届九年级期中)当前，全市各学校正开展＂读书伴我成长＂活动，请你根据活动主题并结合表中的信息，以＂Growing up with good books＂为题，用英语写一篇80词左右的倡议书，向全校同学发出倡议。
| 读书的益处 | 获取知识，增长见识(open one’s mind)，使人快乐 |
| 存在的现象 | 听音乐，看电视，上网，占用了大部分业余时间 |
| 发出的倡议 | 多读书，读好书。向世界传播中国传统文化，让读书成为我们生活的一部分。 |
要求：倡议书要包括所有的要点；倡议书的开头已给出，不计入总字数。
My dear friends,
Reading is very important. __________________
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跟踪训练
(一)
【思路导航】
本文是以第一人称叙述自己上初三后的烦恼，所以应该用第一人称单数，句子的时态用一般现在时，不要遗漏要点，要注意上下文的衔接，用自己熟悉的词汇及句式。可以适当地进行扩展。
【参考范文】
Dear Sigmund Friend,
My name is Daniel. I’m from Sunshine Middle School. I am fifteen years old. Now I am a Grade 9 student. I love sports very much because it can bring strength to my body and mind. I am very confident and I am not afraid of making speeches in front of many people.
However, I have some problems now. I have too much homework every day. I often stay up late to finish it. I don’t get enough sleep and I feel tired in class. I find it hard to achieve a balance between my homework and my hobby.
What should I do? Can you offer me some valuable suggestions? I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Best wishes.
Daniel
【名师点睛】
1. 细心审题，明确要求 。
搞清题目的要求，以便根据不同的题材、体裁，写出不同格式，风格各异的文章，此外，还要注意人称、时态、地点等信息，避免出错。
2. 抓住重点，理顺要点。
草拟提纲，分清各要点之间的内在联系，寻求逻辑次序，分出层次，确定如何下手，使表达内容条理清楚。
3. 遣词造句，表达规范 。
写作时，应尽量选出你有把握的词，尽量使用短句(简单句)。如果有的单词不会写，有的思想不会用英语表达，你可以设法绕开，最好找一个同义词、同义句，或近义词、词组短语来代替。
4. 连句成篇，修改润色。
检查主题是否明确，表达方式是否恰当，接下来检查所写内容是否切题，该交待的内容是否交待了，最后检查所用时态、人称是否符合要求。检查段落是否完整，句子表达是否准确，语法、拼写、标点、移行、大小写等方面是否有误。
(二)
【思路导航】
这是一篇材料作文。根据提示内容可知用一般现在时，把所提示的内容逐条翻译成英文，同时还应注意写作中要有适当性的发挥。
【参考范文】
It’s time for the Campus Singer Competition. And I’m your host, Sara.
Today we have eight contestants. They are from every grade in our school.
The rules of the Campus Singer Competition are simple. Every contestant will sing a song on the stage. And then our audience will decide on the singer they like best. The one who gets the most support will be the winner of the competition.
Are you ready for the competition? The first contestant coming on the stage is …
You’re today’s lucky winner. You’ve won today’s prize — a computer!
Thanks, everyone. That’s today’s show. See you next time.
【亮点说明】
这篇作文层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如It’s time for sth，sing a song on the stage，decide on，be ready for，See you next time等。而The rules of the Campus Singer Competition are simple./ The one who gets the most support will be the winner of the competition./ You’ve won today’s prize — a computer!等多种句式的运用更是为文章增色不少。
(三)
【思路导航】
这是一篇演讲稿，写作时注意格式：称呼语及结束语；写作时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。适当使用连词，同时要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章添彩。根据要求必须介绍书籍的名字，阅读时间，书籍目录，阅读理由等，可以根据需要适当增加细节。最后不要忘记谈谈自己的看法，这样才能体现文章的完整性。此外，还要考虑：如何引出自己的演讲话题，怎么介绍自己的这本好书；从书中学到了什么；如何深化演讲主题，增强演讲的鼓动性。
【参考范文】
Boys and girls,
As Francis Bacon once said, reading makes a full man. A good book can affect our life in one way or another. My Life Story by Helen Keller is one such book as touched my heart. It is about how Helen overcame her physical disabilities and succeeded by struggling in her long and hard learning period.
From the book, I learned that whenever we come across difficulties or even misfortune, we should never give in or run away. Instead, we are supposed to face them bravely and try to find ways out. Reading can not only improve our ability to understand the world, but also wash our souls. To live an enjoyable and meaningful life, let’s read more good books!
That’s all. Thank you!
【亮点说明】
文章首句引用名人名言As Francis Bacon once said, reading makes a full man. 引出话题A good book can affect our life in one way or another。这可谓事半功倍，为文章开了个好头。向听众介绍自己读过的一本好书时，用一个简单句My Life Story by Helen Keller is one such book as touched my heart.直接明了，使听众一下就能接受到这些信息。 复合句It is about how Helen overcame her physical disabilities and succeeded by struggling in her long and hard learning period.介绍了书籍内容，为后文自己的感受埋下伏笔。文章的结尾非常具有鼓动性，尽显文章风采。
真题再现
题组一
(一)
【写作思路】
这是一篇材料作文，根据李文的发言流程图写一篇英文发言稿。主题是A Green World。因为今天暑期，你将代表你校赴瑞士参加“模拟联合国”会议并发言，主要从介绍自己、中国为“绿色世界”已经做的和“我”是怎样做得。这三个方面去介绍。时态为一般将来时和现在完成时，人称为第一人称。注意作文中必须包含材料上的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。
【参考范文】
Ladies and gentlemen!
My name is Li Wen. I’m a student of Wuxi Sunshine Middle School. This year, I am fifteen years old. China has made its own efforts for the green world. Many factories have met the discharge standards. We have made use of many new energy sources. For example: wind, solar and hydroelectric power. What should we do as middle school students? First of all, we should turn off the lights in time. Secondly, when we take a shower, we should save water. Third, when we go shopping, we should use cloth bags instead of plastic bags. If so, we have made our due efforts for environmental protection.
【名师点评】
【高分句型一】
China has made its own efforts for the green world. 中国为绿色世界做出了自己的努力。
Many factories have met the discharge standards. 许多工厂的排污都达到了排放标准。
We have made use of many new energy sources. 我们利用了许多新能源。
这三句话，简短而有力量，体现了作者的语言功底深厚。
【高分句型二】
Third, when we go shopping, we should use cloth bags instead of plastic bags. 第三，我们去购物时，应该用布袋代替塑料袋。句子when we go shopping,是由when 引导的时间状语从句。
(二)
【写作思路】
写作要求以电子邮件的形式介绍自己中考后的第一个周末活动计划。写作时要仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确要点：分别从时间和活动安排来介绍，根据表达的内容确定句子的时态，就本文而言应该用一般将来时态，会用到be going to结构，人称为第一人称。在时间的表达上注意介词的正确使用，在某一天的早晨、下午、晚上用介词on。写作时，还需注意语句间的衔接，使用恰当的连词，使文意连贯，表达流畅。
【参考范文】
Dear Alan,
I’m going to enjoy myself during the coming weekend. On the morning of 22nd June, I’m going to get up a little late and then read an interesting storybook. In the afternoon I’m going out with my family and friends. We’re going to take a walk in the country near our home or go swimming in the lake. And on 23rd June we’re going to collect liter in the park near my friend’s house. I think it’s going to be a great weekend-busy but good fun!
Yours,
Chen Wei
(三)
【写作思路】
本文属于申请信，给主办人史密斯先生写一封介绍个人情况的申请邮件，包含个人信息与兴趣爱好和梦想职业与个人计划。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。
【参考范文】
Dear Mr. Smith,
It’s my pleasure to introduce myself to you．
My name is Li Hua．I like reading and writing．I spend lots of time reading in the library with my classmates after school．And I have a habit of keeping a dairy．I want to be a writer when I grow up．So After knowing your summer camp，I feel very excited because it’s about dream job experience．If I have this kind of opportunity to experience my dream job，I will cherish this chance．After work，I will spend more time making a summary．
I do hope to join in the activity and look forward to your reply．
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
【名师点评】
这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如like doing, spend+时间+doing sth, keep a diary, grow up以及If I have this kind of opportunity to experience my dream job，I will cherish this chance中if引导的条件句用一般现在时，主句用一般将来时，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。
(四)
【写作思路】
本文是根据材料提示写作，所以分析所给材料之后，首先要在头脑中确定文章的整体结构，然后逐步细化．就像盖房子一样，先有整体框架，然后是房间，最后是室内装修．
【参考范文】
Dear friends，
Everyone has only one life， we should treasure our lives． But how can we protect ourselves？
Here are some suggestions．
On the one hand， we should realize the importantce of safety and know what to do． First，when we go out， we must follow traffic rules． If we walk，we must use sidewalks and mustn’t run a red light；If we ride bikes，we must ride along the right side and shouldn’t carry others；Second， we should develop a healthy eating habits． Eat regular meals every day and try not to eat junk food or eat less．When food smells bad， don’t eat it．Third，when we play sports or games， be careful not to hurt ourselves．Fourth，we mustn’t swim in rivers without our parents or other adults around．
On the other hand， we should learn to protect ousrselves， which is one of the most important living skills． We must be careful when making friends especially online．Some person online are not honest．They are dangerous， so we must keep away from them． If we happen to have trouble， we should keep calm and remember to ask our parents， teachers or police for help so that we can protect ourselvs from danger or being hurt．
In a word， we should try our best to protect ourselves and value our lives．
That’s all． Thank you !
【名师点评】
高分句型一： we should realize the importance of safety and know what to do. 我们应该意识到安全的重要性，并且知道如何去做。短语the importance of，what to do结构；
高分句型二：when we go out，we must follow traffic rules. 当我们外出时，必须遵守交通规则。状语从句，情态动词；
高分句型三：we should learn to protect ourselves，which is one of the most important living skills．我们应该学会保护自己，这是最重要的生存能力之一。定语从句；
高分句型四：we must keep away from them．我们必须远离他们。keep away from 短语
高分句型五： we should keep calm and remember to ask our parents，teachers or police for help so that we can protect ourselves from danger or being hurt．
我们应该保持冷静，并且记住及时向家长，老师或警察求助。以便于保护自己远离危险，避免受伤害。remember to do结构，ask…for help，in time短语；so that引导的目的状语从句，protect.. from…短语。
题组二
(一)
Exercising is important!
Recently, we have done a survey about students’ exereising. Aocording to the survey, 32% of the students spend over one hour every day doing exercise, while 68% of them spend less than one hour. The reasons are as follows: Firstly, 46% of them have too much homework, so they have no time to do exercise. Secondly, 29% of them are not good at exercise. Thirdly, 25% of them are not interested in it.
As we all know, exercising is god for our health, which keeps our minds sharp and makes us confident and happy.
In my opinion, we should keep a balance between our study and exercising. Besides, we should develop a good habit of doing exercise. (104 words)
【名师点评】
这是一篇图表，关于初中生锻炼情况的调查活动。动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料可知本文主要是应用一般现在时态，注意标点符合及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
(二)
【思路导航】
这是一篇书信应用文。在信中要介绍展演的时间、地点及展演内容。根据内容主要运用一般现在时态及一般将来时。写作中尽量使用自己熟悉的句式句型，适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
【参考范文】
Dear Mike,
I know you are interested in Chinese traditional culture.
Now, I have a piece of good news to share with you. There is an activity about Chinese traditional operas at 2:00 p.m. on July 1. It will be held on the playground in our school and all the teachers and students will attend. On that day, a culture show and many wonderful opera performances will be put on. It’s a chance for you to learn more about Chinese traditional culture. Come and join us! I think we’ll have a great time.
I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【亮点说明】
这篇短文内容涵盖了题目要求的所有要点，表达准确，意思连贯，符合逻辑。文章脉络清晰，自然流畅，首先通过分享好消息来引出展演及展演时间，进而介绍展演地点及展演内容最后提出邀请。同时文章还使用了一些常用的句式和短语，这为文章增色不少。在学习中注意积累，掌握一些常用句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。
(三)
【思路导航】
本文是根据图画的指示图标向同学们介绍园区设施(facilities)的位置及游园注意事项，所以一定要注意仔细认真读图，确定路线图。因为这是口头介绍，所以短文要符合格式。注意要使用高级词汇及句式，要注意上下文的衔接。
【参考范文】
Hello, boys and girls! May I have your attention, please? Today we choose to rise to this beautiful place — Happy Park to celebrate our English Day! Before entering the park, there are some specific details we must know first.
To begin with, we need to be clear about the location of the facilities. After entering the park, we can see a big grassland in front of you. On the left side is a food store where you can buy some food. And on the right side stand a toilet. A beautiful swimming pool lies behind the grassland, where the water is clean enough for you to swim. What’s more, you should keep the following rules in mind. First, you must park your bikes on each side of the gate. Second, you can neither pick flowers in the park, nor play football on the grassland.
That’s all. Thank you for your listening and have a good day.
【亮点说明】
短文运用了一些短语和句式，如：choose to do sth选择做某事；need to do sth需要做某事；on the right side在右边；be enough for sb to do sth对某人来说是足够的。用了定语从句，如：there are some specific details we must know first.。用了倒装句，如：And on the right side stand a toilet.，增加了文章的亮点。
(四)
【思路导航】
本文是一篇招聘广告。写作时注意格式，题目要求。为老年之家招聘志愿者，注意提示1．要求有爱心，善沟通……2．请有意者给你打电话686-7729。动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥。注意叙述的条理性，适当使用固定句型或短语。像Are you good with…？； We need…；call…at …。
【参考范文】
Volunteers Wanted
We need volunteers in the old people’s home. Do you want to help the old people? Are you good with the old? Can you sing? Can you dance? Can you play chess with the old? Do you know many stories? If you want to join us, please call Wang Qiang at 686﹣7729. Thanks.
【亮点说明】
这篇短文格式正确，叙述有条理，语言流畅，表达准确，逻辑清晰。特别一些招聘句型的使用，像We need volunteers in the old people’s home．Do you want to…；Are you good with; Can you; If you want to to join us 等，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，减少错误，给文章增彩。
(五)
【思路导航】
本文是一篇英文演讲稿。演讲稿写作要注意结构清楚，逻辑清晰，观点明确。内容包括以下三点：1. 培养独立意识：独立思考；自主选择；敢于尝试……2. 调节学习生活：获得乐趣；丰富生活；体验成功……3. 提升个人素养：直面困难；……
【参考范文】
Dear Chairperson,
I would like to join the DIY Club. For me, I like to do something by myself. Here are some reasons why I want to join your club.
First, making things by myself can cultivate my independent consciousness because I need to make things on my own. It’s important for teenagers to think independently and choose freely, and try things bravely.
Second, joining the club can adjust my study life. DIY has so much fun and it can enrich my life. What’s more, after I finish an object, I can experience success.
Third, DIY can improve personal qualities. It makes us face difficulties directly and be patient with questions.
I hope I can be a member of the DIY Club.
Yours Sincerely,
Justin
(六)
【思路导航】
这是一篇应用文，写一篇留言条。也是一篇材料作文，给出了一些材料，并给出了一些提示单词和提示问题。我们要根据提示材料和问题(Where are you going? What are you going to do? When and how will you get home?)用正确的英语把要点表达出来，用上所给单词，并适当发挥想象。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不要遗漏要点。根据材料内容可知本文主要是用一般将来时来写。首先，回答 ＂Where are you going?＂ 要明确写出外出的地点。然后回答＂What are you going to do?＂具体写出我们到达外出地之后所进行的活动。接着回答＂When and how will you get home?＂需要写出回家的方式和到家的时间。最后，希望Mrs. Smith不要为我担心。写作中要适当使用连词，注意叙述的顺序，要符合逻辑关系。
【参考范文】
Dear Mrs. Smith,
My friend Jim asks me to go out with his family this afternoon. I am writing to tell you that we will meet in the park. Then we will go to the movie theater to watch a movie. Finally, we are going to go boating in the lake. Don’t worry about me. We will be back at 6:00 p.m. Jim’s father will send me home by taxi. I am sure to have a lot of fun. Waiting for my back.
Yours,
Li Hua
【亮点说明】
这篇短文语句通顺，表达准确。学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语,特别适用了表示先后顺序的词Then，Finally，使表达具有条里性，句式Don’t worry about me. .I am sure to等的使用，更增加了文章的色彩，此文表达具有逻辑性,，有条理。
模拟检测
(一)
【思路导航】
1. 本题为材料作文。要求学生把所给的材料尽量都用上。
2. 时态用一般现在时和过去式来写。
3. 人称用第一人称来写。
4. 用上所学的句型used to do sth. ＂过去常常做某事＂。
5. 在用上所给材料的基础上，可适当发挥。
6. 注意词数的要求。
【参考范文】
Dear Maria’,
How are you?
My life has changed a lot since I became a student of Grade 9. I used to have less homework and I could learn easily. However, everything is different now. I have a lot of homework to do every day. I’m under great pressure. I used to take part in all kinds of activities after school, but now I have to study all the time and sometimes even stay up late. I have given up my hobbies. What’s more, I used to spend the weekends with my family and friends. Now I have to take classes on weekends. I fell so unhappy. Do you feel the same?
Yours’,
Liu Mei
(二)
【思路导航】
这是一篇材料作文。根据材料内容可知用一般将来时，按照提示内容逐条翻译成英文，同时进行适当的发挥。
【参考范文】
Notice
The Students’ Union is going to organize a special activity next Sunday. Students feel stressed these days, I think the activity can make us relaxed. We can not only get along well with our classmates, but also know the culture of the city.
We’ll meet at the school gate at 7:30 am and take the bus to the East Lake, then we’ll go to the Yellow Crane Tower. We can enjoy the beautiful scenery. After that, we’ll go to Mulan Great Lake to have a picnic in the afternoon. We’ll take the bus back to school at 6:00 pm.
If you are interested in this activity, please sign your name before next Tuesday at 5pm. It’s also necessary for you to bring your ID card in order to buy tickets.
Wish you a wonderful time!
The Students’ Union
XX年XX月XX日
【亮点说明】
这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如is going to，make sb. relaxed，not only… but also，at the school gate，after that，have a picnic，take the bus back to school，interested in，in order to，Wish you a wonderful time等。而We can not only get along well with our classmates, but also know the culture of the city.，We’ll meet at the school gate at 7:30 am and take the bus to the East Lake, then we’ll go to the Yellow Crane Tower.，It’s also necessary for you to bring your ID card in order to buy tickets.等多种复杂句式的运用更是为文章增色不少。
(三)
【思路导航】
这是一篇材料作文。根据表格内容可知用一般现在时，按照提示内容逐条进行回答，同时还应注意写作中要有适当性的发挥。
【参考范文】
My dear friends,
Reading is very important. We can get knowledge through reading. It can not only open our minds，but also make us cleverer and happier. Our study can be improved if we read more good books. The more we read, the more we will learn, the brighter our future will become.
However, some students spend much time in listening to music, watching TV or going on line to play games. It takes much of their spare time, so I would like to suggest that everyone should read more books，especially read classics so that we can spread our Chinese traditional culture to the world. Let’s start reading now and let it become a part of our life.
【亮点说明】
这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如not only… but also…，open our minds，make us cleverer and happier，the more… the more，listen to music，play games等。而It can not only open our minds，but also make us cleverer and happier./ The more we read, the more we will learn, the brighter our future will become./ so I would like to suggest that everyone should read more books，especially read classics so that we can spread our Chinese traditional culture to the world.等多种句式的运用更是为文章增色不少，是本篇习作的亮点。
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