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考点五十八 书面表达之咨询建议类
四步法写建议类书面表达
1. 首先要知道给出建议的格式：常用书信格式；
2. 然后写出提建议的原因；
3. 最后根据具体的情况给出明确的建议；
4. 写出希望。
英语中咨询建议类作文通常以书信的形式呈现，英语书信类作文的常用表达：
开头部分：
How nice to hear from you again.
Let me tell you something about the activity.
I’m glad to have received your letter.
I’m pleased to hear that you’re coming to China for a visit.
I’m writing to thank you for your help during my stay in America.
结尾部分：
With best wishes.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
I’d appreciate it if you could reply earlier.
We should take measures to control pollution in order to save the world.
We’d better take effective measures to prevent students from cheating on exams.
The government decided to take strong measures against drug abuse.
Urgent measures should be taken to prevent terrorists from carrying out further attacks.
Why not…/Why don’t you…
You can have a try…/Try to do…
Don’t be afraid of…
I believe you can do it. Good luck.
In one/a word/Generally speaking
解决方法类作文模板
In recent days, we have to face the problem____________A, which is becoming more and more serious. First, ____________(说明A的现状). Second, ____________（举例进一步说明现状）.
Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation. For one thing, ____________（解决方法一）. For another ____________（解决方法二）. Finally, ____________（解决方法三）.
Personally, I believe that____________（我的解决方法）.
Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is waiting us because ____________（带来的好处）.
(一)
请根据下面Frank在信中所提出的困惑，以Maria的名义给他写一封回信，帮助他解决问题。80词左右。
Dear Editor,
I am a middle school student. I have many hobbies. I like playing football very much. But I can’t do it. I want to join the football team. But my parents don’t allow it. So I often argue with my parents.
Should I be allowed to make my own decisions? What should I do?
Yours,
Frank
Dear Frank,
I read your problem from your letter. __________________________________________________________
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Maria
(二)
张燕是九年级学生。她父亲在一家公司工作，家里几乎天天来客人。他们在客厅高声谈笑，有时还一起打牌，弄出许多噪音。这种吵闹的环境使张燕无法集中精力学习。她不知道如何解决这个问题。请你帮她给青少年辅导员王老师写一封信，谈谈她的烦恼并请王老师提出宝贵意见。
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(三)
你班Carl同学最近遇到了一些问题，希望得到一些建议和帮助。请你以Mr. Friend的身份给Car写封信，针对Carl的所有问题提出一些有益的建议。
| Carl的问题 | 将来想当一名记者，但很安静，不喜欢与人交谈 |
| 喜欢穿红色衣服，但同学嘲笑他像个女生 | |
| 喜欢篮球，并且经常打，作业花的时间较少，不知如何平衡自己
的学业和爱好 |
|
| 你的建议 | ……(至少四条) |
要求：1. 不能出现真实的个人身份信息；
2. 不得遗漏提示信息，条理清楚，字迹工整，语意连贯可适当发挥；
3. 词数：110词左右(信的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数)。
Dear Carl,
Thank you very much for telling me about your problems. I hope I can help you. _______________________
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I hope you think my advice is valuable to you.
Best wishes,
Mr. Friend
题组一
(一)【2019 •北京市】
根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
假如你是李华，你们学校正在开展“安全月”宣传活动，倡议大家制作关于安全教育的主题海报，你们班交换生Peter给你发邮件询问相关事情。请用英语回复一封邮件，告诉他海报上交的时间，并分享你设计海报的一些想法。
提示词语：design，safety rule，careful，protect，picture
提示问题：When should you hand in the poster?
What would you like to share with Peter about designing the poster?
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to receive your email _______________________________________________________________
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If there is anything more that I can help with, please let me know.
Yours,
Li Hua
【写作思路】
这篇作文要求我们以李华的身份给Peter写一封邮件，告诉他关于制作关于安全教育的主题海报的相关事宜。由题目中给出的提示问题可知，短文中应包括以下内容：首先告诉Peter海报上交的时间；然后和他分享一些设计海报的想法。第二个内容应该是短文的主体。题目中并没有规定具体的写作内容，学生们应联系自己的实际生活，展开合理的想象，将这些内容补充完整后，用正确的英语表达出来，这是写作中的一个难点。短文应以一般现在时为主、第一、二人称来叙述。写作时应注意：首先要合理安排短文内容，叙述应有层次、有条理。可以使用一些表示先后顺序的词或短语，如First, Second, Last but not least等等。题目中给出的提示词应该在短文中用上。其次应注意文章的表达，英语句式的结构与汉语是不同的，因此不能根据汉语思维逐词翻译，应该从句式的整体考虑，先确定主干结构，然后添加修饰成分。为提升作文档次，应注意使用一些高级词汇、短语以及复合句、非谓语动词等复杂结构。同时语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意上下连贯，表达流畅。
【参考范文】
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to receive your email. As it is required，you are supposed to hand in the poster before next Friday.
Being your close friend，I am extremely willing to share some ideas about designing the poster with you. First and foremost，the basic safety rules are of great importance，which should be included in your poster. In the second place，following the safety rules is so meaningful and crucial that you had better remind your readers of its significance and advise them to be careful both in and out of school. Last but by no means least，if I were you，I would add a few suggestions about safety awareness，considering that better safe than sorry. In addition，it is a good idea for you to draw a few pictures on your poster so as to make it more lively and acceptable.
If there is anything more that I can help with, please let me know.
Yours,
Li Hua
【名师点评】
这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，给Peter写邮件，告诉他制作主题海报的一些事情。短文有以下几个优点：首先文章内容完整，结构清晰，符合题目要求。除题目中给出的开头和结尾，短文主要包括两个内容：第一段用一句话告诉Peter上交海报的时间；文章的中心和重点是放在了第二段上，这一段中作者和Peter分享了一些制作海报的想法。主要从四个方面进行阐述，内容非常详实，并使用了First and foremost, In the second place, Last but by no means least, In addition等短语，分清了这一段的层次，叙述非常有条理。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，用词准确，并使用了较复杂的句式结构，表现了作者较强的语言运用能力。短文中较好的句型有：Being your close friend，I am extremely willing to share some ideas about designing the poster with you.、In the second place，following the safety rules is so meaningful and crucial that you had better remind your readers of its significance and advise them to be careful both in and out of school、In addition，it is a good idea for you to draw a few pictures on your poster so as to make it more lively and acceptable.等。
(二)【2019 •福建省】
假定你是李华，收到英国笔友 Harry 的邮件，获悉他在机器人制作比赛中获奖。请根据邮件内容给他回复。词数 80 左右。
From: Harry@hotmail.com
Dear Li Hua,
I’m glad to tell you that I’ve just won the the first place in a robot- making competition. I love robots! They bring me great fun.
What do yo think of robots? Do you want to have your own robot? Why? Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Harry
To: Lihua 2019@163.com
参考词汇：congratulation 祝贺注意事项：
1. 回复邮件时可适当发挥，邮件格式已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名。
Dear Harry,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【写作思路】
此类观点表达和原因说明类的作文，在我们三轮的中考复习中进行过系统的训练。学生可根据日常所授的写作模板，对全文内容及结构进行合理安排。
(1)结构：开头表示祝贺，使用所给提示词；
(2)正文要点：表达兴趣并说明原因，至少两点(如热点科技，对科技创新的兴趣，对生活的改变，对医疗、救援的帮助等)；
写作时从单词拼写到句子结构，从时态到语态，都应该注意统一。在打草稿时把需要用到的关键词、高级句式、关键结构甚至注意事项等简单地写在题目旁边，以尽量规避错误。
【参考范文】
Dear Harry,
Congratulations！How glad I am to share your good news!
I think robots are helpful in many ways. And in the future, they will play more important roles in our daily life. Plus, I am dying to have a robot of my own. I can have it take care of my grandparents when we are not at home. You see, my grandparents are old and cannot move easily. It can help them do some housework such as cooking, cleaning the house and so on.
Hoping you will make greater progress.
Yours,
Li Hua
(三)【2019 •陕西省】
即将毕业的你，将如何处理初中阶段的各种书籍和笔记呢?假如你是李华，请根据以下提示，给学校英文报写一封电子邮件，分享你处理这些书籍和笔记的计划与理由。
要求：
1. 参考表格内容，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 文章不得出现任何真实信息(姓名，校名和地名等)；
4. 词数：不少于70个词，(开头已经给出，但不计入总词数)。
Dear Editor,
My name is Li Hua. I’m going to graduate soon. I’d like to share some ideas about how to deal with my books and notebooks.
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There are my ideas. I hope they can help.
Yours,
Li Hua
【写作思路】
本篇作文为应用文，要求写一封电子邮件，写作时应注意以下几点内容：
1. 审题：不需要写题目，开头结尾已给出，只需要按照给出的提示写出自己如何处理笔记和书籍的计划和理由，给的提示短语需要全部列出。
2. 列提纲：
第一段：开头已给出，引入主题，第二段：详细列出自己处理笔记和书籍的计划和理由第三段：结尾已给出，进行情感的升华。
3. 人称及时态：第一人“我”为主，时态应选用一般将来时和一般现在时。
【参考范文】
Dear Editor,
My name is Li Hua. I’m going to graduate soon. I’d like to share some ideas about how to deal with my books and notebooks.
First of all, I will put all my books into different kinds. Secondly, I am going to give my textbooks to my younger cousins. In this way, they can study at home during the coming summer vacation. Besides, I want to have a book sale so that children can buy the picture books at low prices. What’s more, I decide to keep the notebooks for myself. They bring me lots of sweet memories. Finally the used paper will be taken to the waste center.
There are my ideas. I hope they can help.
Yours,
Li Hua
(四)【2019 •四川凉山州】
每个人的生命只有一次，一定要珍爱自己的生命。该怎样安全自救？请根据以下提示，以How to Protect Ourselves为标题写一篇发言稿。
| 安全对每个人都很重要 | 交通：外出时遵守交通规则 | |||
| 食品：吃健康食物，少吃垃圾食品 | ||||
| 活动：体育锻炼时，不要弄伤自己 | 不私自下河游泳 | |||
| 自救是重要的技能之一 | 交友需谨慎 | 远离危险之人 | ||
| 遇到危险保持冷静 | 然后要及时报警或向老师、家长求助 | 尽可能避免受伤害
保证自己的安全 |
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要求：1. 语言表达准确，短文连贯、通顺。
2. 短文应包括所有内容，可适当发挥，不要逐句翻译。
3. 词数80左右。文章开头部分已给出，不计人总词数。
参考词汇：safety,traffic rules, hurt oneself, without permission, self-protection, stay away from…, be careful, be in danger, keep calm, call…for help, be hurt.
Dear friends,
Everyone has only one life, we should treasure our lives. But how can we protect ourselves?
Here are some suggestions. _____________________________________________________________________
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In a word, we should try our best to protect ourselves and value our lives.
That’s all. Thank you!
【写作思路】
本文是根据材料提示写作，所以分析所给材料之后，首先要在头脑中确定文章的整体结构，然后逐步细化．就像盖房子一样，先有整体框架，然后是房间，最后是室内装修．
【参考范文】
Dear friends，
Everyone has only one life， we should treasure our lives． But how can we protect ourselves？
Here are some suggestions．
On the one hand， we should realize the importantce of safety and know what to do． First，when we go out， we must follow traffic rules． If we walk，we must use sidewalks and mustn’t run a red light；If we ride bikes，we must ride along the right side and shouldn’t carry others；Second， we should develop a healthy eating habits． Eat regular meals every day and try not to eat junk food or eat less．When food smells bad， don’t eat it．Third，when we play sports or games， be careful not to hurt ourselves．Fourth，we mustn’t swim in rivers without our parents or other adults around．
On the other hand， we should learn to protect ousrselves， which is one of the most important living skills． We must be careful when making friends especially online．Some person online are not honest．They are dangerous， so we must keep away from them． If we happen to have trouble， we should keep calm and remember to ask our parents， teachers or police for help so that we can protect ourselvs from danger or being hurt．
In a word， we should try our best to protect ourselves and value our lives．
That’s all． Thank you !
【名师点评】
高分句型一： we should realize the importance of safety and know what to do. 我们应该意识到安全的重要性，并且知道如何去做。短语the importance of，what to do结构；
高分句型二：when we go out，we must follow traffic rules. 当我们外出时，必须遵守交通规则。状语从句，情态动词；
高分句型三：we should learn to protect ourselves，which is one of the most important living skills．我们应该学会保护自己，这是最重要的生存能力之一。定语从句；
高分句型四：we must keep away from them．我们必须远离他们。keep away from 短语
高分句型五： we should keep calm and remember to ask our parents，teachers or police for help so that we can protect ourselves from danger or being hurt．
我们应该保持冷静，并且记住及时向家长，老师或警察求助。以便于保护自己远离危险，避免受伤害。remember to do结构，ask…for help，in time短语；so that引导的目的状语从句，protect.. from…短语。
(五)【2019 •贵州省安顺市】
请你根据上面五个问题的内容及你的回答，结合以下提示，以“How Can We Protect Ourselves at School?”为题，写一篇80-100词的英语短文。文中不得出现真实校名和人名。
提示：
1. 谨慎交友。
2. 不参与打架斗殴。
3. 面对校园欺凌怎样自我保护。
参考词汇：1. self-protection(自我保护) 2. bully(n./v.欺凌)
3. personal safety(人身安全)4. have violent behaviors(打架斗殴)
How Can We Protect Ourselves at School?
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【写作思路】
这是一篇话题作文，以“How Can We Protect Ourselves at School?”为题，写一篇80-100词的英语短文。本文人称主要第一人称，时态主要是一般现在时。仔细阅读所给材料，认真审题，确定主题，确定要点，根据要点适当发挥，列出提纲。短文必须包含提示内容。字数80-100词。要运用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有连贯性。根据提示要点，列出本文的写作提纲。写完以后，注意再读一遍，看看有无单词拼写、标点、语法错误(时态、主谓一致等)。
【参考范文】
How Can We Protect Ourselves at School?
School bullies happen in almost every school. In my school, we sometimes have bullies and some students are hurt, so it is really bad for us to bully others or be bullied at school.
We are supposed to stop any school bully when we are in the trouble of it. For example, we should stay calm before a bullying behavior happens. We should always be friendly and helpful when making friends with others. Here are some of my ideas about stopping school bullies. Firstly, we will learn how to have a self-protection because our personal safety is the most important. Secondly, we should be peaceful with others at all times and can’t have any violent behavior. Finally, obeying school rules is also a way to avoid school bullies.
I’m hoping that no school bullies will happen at school in the future, do you think so?
(六)【2019 •襄阳市】
据了解，为了进一步引导中学生积极参加体育锻炼，提高身体素质，襄阳市教育主管部门正在研究制定有关“中考”体育考试的改革方案( the plan)，考虑在原有项目的基础上增加篮球、排球或足球，总分(the score)也由30分增加至50分。作为一名参加过体育“中考”的学生，你对这样的改革持什么样的态度。请根据写作要点提示，用英语写一篇短文表述你的观点。
1．要点提示：
(l)观点明确(要么赞成，要么反对)：
(2)理由充分(可针对增加考试的项目和调整的分值，也可只选其一。限三条理由)；
(3)给出建议(围绕你的观点提出一条合理化建议)。
2．注意事项：
(l)字数：90词左右：
(2)行文应连贯流畅；
(3)文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。
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【写作思路】
这是一篇给材料作文。襄阳市教育主管部门正在研究制定有关“中考”体育考试的改革方案，考虑在原有项目的基础上增加篮球、排球或足球，总分(the score)也由30分增加至50分。作为一名参加过体育“中考”的学生，你对这样的改革持什么样的态度。要求根据写作要点提示，用英语写一篇短文表述自己的观点。文章时态主要用一般现在时，人称主要用第一、第三人称。在写作时，注意紧扣主题，连句成篇，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。
【参考范文】
In my opinion, I agree with the reform plan of “high school entrance examination” physical education examination.
It is reported that most young people are getting unhealthy. Without regular exercise, students are getting weaker and weaker. If the total score of “high school entrance examination” sports is increased, Both teachers and students will undoubtedly attach great importance to physical education, and it’s easy to imagine the phenomenon that PE is always taken away will never be seen. Students will be healthier and more energetic in their study. It is helpful to improve students’ comprehensive ability and quality.
I think every school should make a plan to cultivate students’ interest in sports so as to improve students’ physical quality.
题组二
(一)(2018年山东省青岛中考)
中央电视台《经典咏流传》节目的播出，再次激发了人们对经典文学作品的阅读热情。读书可以成就更美好的自己，让读书伴随我们成长。请根据以下要点提示，以＂Growing up with Reading＂为题写一篇英语短文介绍你曾经读过的一本书或—首诗，并建议大家多读书，读好书。
要点提示：
| 读书的重要性 | 1. 获取知识，开阔眼界； |
| 2. 提升自我，增强自信…… | |
| 读过的一本书或
一首诗 |
1. 作品内容简介； |
| 2. 读书感悟及对自己的影响。 | |
| 多读书，读好书 | 1. 利用闲暇时间多读书，养成读书的好习惯； |
| 2. 多读经典文学作品…… |
注意：
1. 短文应包括以上要点，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯。
2. 文中不得出现自己的真实姓名、学校及地名。
3. 词数：80—100(文章开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
参考词汇：classic 经典作品； open up one’s eyes 开阔眼界；improve oneself 提升自我； be more confident 更自信；responsibility 责任；cooperation 合作。
Growing up with Reading
Have you watched the program Everlasting Classics on CCTV? This program makes us more interested in reading books, especially classics. ________________________________________________________________
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(二)
(2017﹒山东威海)假如你是＂Kids Advice Magazine＂的编辑，请针对Evan的烦恼，用英语给他写一封80词以上的回信，对他进行开导。信的开头和落款已给出，不计入词数。
要点提示：
1. 陈述有兄弟姐妹的优势：弟妹的崇拜、不孤单、学会与人相处或分享……
2. 说明不同年龄段有不同的责任和义务：自己的，父母的，弟妹的……
3. 建议、鼓励：不比较、不抱怨，做好自己所能做的事
词汇提示(仅供参考)：complain抱怨(vi. & vt.)，admire，compare
Dear Evan,
It’s not easy being in your situation. It’s normal to have these feelings. But every coin has two sides ________
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Yours truly,
Ron Todd
(三)
(2017﹒山东聊城)假定你是张华，你在外地学习的好朋友王伟发电子邮件向你请教如何学好英语。请你根据以下要点用英语给他回封电子邮件。
内容包括：
(1)看英语电影、听英语歌曲，猜测生词意思。
(2)与外教交谈。
(3)把单词写在纸条上，利用纸条记忆单词。
注意：
(1)词数：80左右；
(2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
(3)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Wang Wei，
I received your email yesterday. In the email, you asked me how to improve your English. Now I’d like to give you some advice.
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These are my suggestions. I hope they are useful to you.
Yours,
Zhang Hua
(四)
(2017﹒江苏苏州)假定你是苏华，你最近认识的英国笔友David给你发了一封电子邮件，想了解你初中三年来在学习和生活方而的一些收获、困惑和感受。请认真阅读下而的邮件，根据信中的内容及你的实际用英语回复。
| To: suhua@ china.com |
| From: davidsmith@ britain.com |
| Subject: School life |
| Dear Su Hua,
Glad to hear you’re graduating from junior high. I’m interested in how you feel about those three years of school life. Would you please tell me the following things? ●What do you like best about your school life? ●What’s the biggest problem as a junior student? ●Who has helped you most? And why? ● Do you enjoy your school life? Why or why not? I look forward to hearing from you soon. All the best. David |
注意：1. 词数90左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数；
2. 回复须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使全文连贯、通顺；
3. 文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Dear David,
Thank you so much for your email. I’m very happy to tell you about my school life. ____________________
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How about your school life? Write to me soon.
Best wishes,
Su Hua
(一)
(深圳市宝安中学2017—2018年度初三期中)你叫James，是初三的一名学生，你的好朋友Joyce近期很烦恼，她上周日因为使用手机的问题与她父亲发生了争吵，她父亲把她手机都摔坏了。她这几天情绪很低落，学习不认真，你很担心她，所以你给她写了一封信。
要点：
1. 你非常理解她的感受。
2.对她的问题提出至少两点建议。
注意：
1. 词数：80词左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)；
2. 文章必须包含所有提示内容，并可适当发挥；
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
4. 条理清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范。
参考词汇：1. have a quarrel与……吵架 2. treat对待 3. affect影响
Dear Joyce,
I am so sorry to hear that you had a quarrel with your father and he even broke your smart phone. _________
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Best wishes!
Yours,
James
(二)
(江苏省连云港市岗埠中学2015—2016学年度九年级)张涛是一名九年级学生，面对繁重的学业和升学压力，他总是感到焦虑不安，晚上还经常失眠。请根据你所学的知识，针对他的问题，运用色彩疗法给他提些建议。
要求：1. 书写工整，语言连贯；
2. 词数：80词左右(信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)
Dear Zhang Tao,
I know as a Grade 9 student, you have some problems now. As your close friend, I want to give you some advice.
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If these still do not work, please make a phone call to me.
Yours,
John
跟踪训练
(一)
【思路导航】
这是一篇材料作文。根据Frank在信中所提出的困惑，以Maria的名义给他写一封回信，帮助他解决问题。首先要明确来信中Frank遇到的问题是什么，通过阅读来信可知，Frank非常喜欢踢足球，想加入足球队。但是他的父母不允许。因此经常和父母争吵。他不知道该怎么办，也想知道应该被允许自己做决定吗？ 写作时要从两个大的方面去写作。时态为一般现在时，人称为第二人称，要用到一些情态动词，内容必须包含所有要点并作适当发挥，注意表达的条理性。
【参考范文】
Dear Frank,
I read your problem from your letter. Many teenagers have hobbies. Sometimes these hobbies get in the way of schoolwork and their parents may worry about their studies. Arguing is not useful. Try to talk with your parents in a friendly way. In my opinion, you can tell them it is good for your health to do sports. You should practice your hobbies after school or on weekends. But you can’t do it as much as you want. As a student，the most important thing is to study. We should have enough time to have fun but not too much. I’m sure you can do it well.
Maria
(二)
【思路导航】
这是一篇材料作文。写作前一定要认真审题，考题要求考生帮助张燕给青少年辅导员王老师写一封信，因此人称要用第一人称来表达，时态为一般现在时，注意主谓一致，同时注意书信的格式。用到的词组或短语有：in a company，talk to each other，play cards together，make a lot of noise，focus on，how to deal with，offer sb. sth.等。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。
【参考范文】
Dear Mr. Wang，
My name is Zhan Yan. I’m a Grade 9 student. I have some problems and I need your help.
My father works in a company. There are always many people coming to my home. They talk to each other loudly and sometimes they even play cards together. They make a lot of noise and this is really terrible. I can’t focus on my study. I don’t know how to deal with this problem. Can you offer me some suggestions? They would be most valuable. Thanks a lot.
Best wishes！
Yours sincerely，
Zhang Yan
(三)
【思路导航】
这是一篇给材料作文，以Mr. Friend的身份给Carl写封信，针对Carl的所有问题提出一些有益的建议。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时，人称为单数第一、第二人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：I hope…，You want to be…，You like…，You must…，You should…，I believe you will…等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。
【参考范文】
Dear Carl,
Thank you very much for telling me about your problems. I hope I can help you. You want to be a reporter in the future, but you are too quiet and you don’t enjoy talking with others. You like wearing red clothes but your classmates think you are like a girl and often laugh at you. You are a student, so you are busy every day. You must have lots of homework, but you are crazy about basketball. You spend a lot of time playing basketball. Like this, you will find you are tired. You should give it up. You don’t stay up late. If you make low marks in exams, you will feel stressed. You should talk about this to your parents or your best friends. They can help you. Please work hard to get good marks. I believe you will go to high school. I hope you think my advice is valuable to you.
Best wishes.
Mr. Friend
【亮点说明】
本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了Carl的问题，接下来介绍我的建议，最后我希望你认为我的建议有用。此处thank you for doing sth, want to do sth, enjoy doing sth, like doing sth, laugh at ,be crazy about, spend time doing sth, give up, stay up, work hard等这些词组的运用也给文章增色不少。
真题再现
(一)
Growing up with Reading
Have you watched the program Everlasting Classics on CCTV? This program makes us more interested in reading books, especially classics. Reading is very important. We can get knowledge through reading. It can not only open our minds, but also make us cleverer and more confident. Our study can be improved if we read more good books.
These days I am reading a book whose title is Jane Eyre, which attracts me a lot. The book’s writer is called Charlotte Bronte, who was born in England in 1816. She had two sisters and one brother, but unfortunately their mother died when they were very young. Actually Jane Eyre is a book whose theme is of love. In the story, Jane Eyre lived a hard life, but she was self-confident and perseverant. In her heart, there is always a mind that if you hold a belief and stick to it, you will eventually achieve your dream.
【名师点评】
这是一篇图表，要求介绍自己读过的一本书。动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料可知本文主要是应用第一、三人称，一般现在时态和过去时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
(二)
【思路导航】
这是一篇针对所给材料而完成的一封回信。首先要读懂阅读理解，明确Evan的烦恼是什么，然后有针对性地进行开导。可根据要点提示所列举的几点去组织材料，要尽量运用不同的句式去表达，来增加文章的亮点。
【参考范文】
Dear Evan,
It’s not easy being in your situation. It’s normal to have these feelings. But every coin has two sides. Being the eldest child in the family surely has its advantages.
Firstly. you used to enjoy all the love from your parents. You’re loved and admired by your brother and sister. You won’t feel lonely with them around you and you can learn how to share and how to get on with others. Together with them you’ll grow up more quickly.
Secondly, people of different ages have different duties. Think of your parents how hard they are working! As you are growing older, you are supposed to do more and do better than your brother and sister. Everyone has to grow up and we all have to do what we should do. We have to be responsible for ourselves
So I think if you don’t compare with babies, just think of your duty, you will feel much better. Don’t complain about your situation. Try your best to do the things of your age.
Attitude is everything. You are sure to grow into an outstanding young man.
Yours truly,
Ron Todd
【亮点说明】
【高分句型一】Everyone has to grow up and we all have to do what we should do. 每个人都会长大，我们都要去做我们应该做的。此句是what引导的宾语从句。
【高分句型二】So I think ①②if you don’t compare with babies，just think of your duty，you will feel much better我认为如果你不和小孩子计较，只是想想自己的职责，你就会感觉更好。
①think后是宾语从句。②if引导的条件状语从句。
(三)
【思路导航】
本篇书面表达是一封书信，结合本题所给的写作信息，阐述＂如何学好英语＂建议。根据内容提示可知本文应运用一般现在时态，注意一些常见句式的应用。写作中注意连词、固定短语的交替使用，使文意连接紧密，还要注意使用丰富的语句，注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，最后最好要表达出自己的感想和看法。
【参考范文】
Dear Wang Wei，
I received your email yesterday. In the email，you asked me how to improve your English. Now I’d like to give you some advice.
Watching English films and listening to English songs are great ways to learn English! Watch and listen several times，and guess the meaning of the new words.
Having a conversation with a foreign teacher is also a good way. You’d better start it with greetings or a question. Also，smile before you speak and do not feel shy. Write four or five words a day on pieces of paper and place them in your room. Read the words when you see them，and try to use them.
These are my suggestions. I hope they are useful to you.
Yours，
Zhang Hua
【亮点说明】
本文结构紧凑，语言简练。文中great ways to do sth，having a conversation with, had better, start it with, place them in your room, try to, and等词(组)的恰当使用，使上下文意连接紧密；文中还多处使用了动名词作主语的句型，and并列句、时间状语从句等复合句，大大增加了信息的容量，使文章增色不少，值得学习。
(四)
【思路导航】
这是一篇给材料作文，向你的英国笔友David发一封电子邮件，介绍你初中三年来在学习和生活方面的一些收获、困惑和感受。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时，人称为单数第一、三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾短语，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：I’m very happy to…，it’s an excellent chance to…，The biggest one is…，Whenever I am…，so she is…等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。
【参考范文】
Dear David,
Thank you so much for your email. I’m very happy to tell you about my school life.
I like the Football Club best because I’ve made quite a few friends by joining the club. Moreover, it’s an excellent chance to learn team spirit.
However, I’ve also met some problems over the three years. The biggest one is how to achieve a balance between my schoolwork and my hobbies. Whenever I am in great need, my English teacher always comes to me, so she is the person who has helped me most in the junior high.
In all, I enjoy my school life because it’s colourful and meaningful.
How about your school life? Write to me soon.
Best wishes.
Su Hua
【亮点说明】
本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了感谢David的来信，并要告诉David我的初中生活；接下来介绍在学习和生活方面的一些收获、困惑和感受；最后询问关于David的学校生活，并送上祝愿。此处thank sb for sth, tell sb about sth, over the three years, in great need, how about等这些短语的运用也让文章增色不少。
模拟检测
(一)
【思路导航】
这是一篇材料作文，提示内容就是本文的写作要点。这些要点构成写作的基本框架。我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来，并适当发挥想象说出自己的观点。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是用一般现在时态来写，要注意主谓一致等问题。写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
【参考范文】
Dear Joyce,
I am so sorry to hear that you had a quarrel with your father and he even broke your smart phone.
I can fully understand your feelings. We want to depend more on ourselves but sometimes our parents still treat us like a primary school student. You have different opinions on using a smart phone with your father. I think your father is worried that using a smart phone may affect your study. After all, we are in Grade 9 and we must try our best to study. Here I have two suggestions for you.
First, you should find a chance to communicate with your father when you both calm down. If you don’t want to talk to him, you can write a letter or an email to him.
Second, I think you should forget this unhappy thing and start to study hard again. Time is very valuable for us, so we can’t afford to waste it .Please raise your spirits!
Best wishes!
Yours,
James
【名师点睛】
首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。
(二)
【思路导航】
本文属于话题作文，利用色彩疗法，给张涛提些建议。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。
【参考范文】
I know as a Grade 9 student, you have some problems now. As your close friend, I want to give you some advice.
Firstly, if you always feel stressed, I advise you to wear blue or white. The two colours can make you feel calm and peaceful. You can also try wearing green, because it can make you feel energetic.
Secondly, you may paint your bedroom blue if you can’t sleep well at night. Sleeping in a blue room is good for your mind and body, because blue can create a feeling of harmony.
Finally, perhaps you should use yellow stationery when you study for exams, because yellow can make you wise.
If these still do not work, please make a phone call to me.
Yours,
John
【亮点说明】
这是一篇优秀的作文，很好地完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别适用一些亮点词句，如firstly, secondly, finally, calm, peaceful, because, energetic, secondly, create, harmony以及perhaps。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。
请先 ！